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[Fortnite Animated — Jablinski]

The animation is almost there. I think you could become an extremely talented artist if you work a bit more on your facial expressions and body gestures. They seem quite frozen at the moment, and you're losing out on some added comedy!

Just have fun experimenting for a bit and checking out some other animations. It's a lot of additional effort, but the viewers will know that and definitely appreciate it.

ZenithQuinn responds:

For sure! Hard these days with a full time job.This was something fun made in a weekend.

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 8]

Good job :)

I think you all did a good job with this flash :D.

The graphics were good, granted they weren't awe-inspiring, but it had a nice charm to it.

The audio quality was great, Jim's voice is a bit irritating in my opinion, but probably wouldn't of worked as well, if a less irritating voice was chosen ;).

In the end, it was a nice ad for flash player, and I did enjoy this flash, so Mazel-Tov!

From the ~~Review Request Club~~

Jimtopia responds:

Lol well Jim is just sort of an irritating character at times I suppose.

[Where ISN'T my mind?]

Soooo short :(

I admit, I like the song a lot, and I thought the cover is great, but I wish it was just 30seconds to a minute longer!

It was just about to get to the chorus, and it just stopped! which is such a shame :(.

The animation part was quite good, as I liked how the lyrics moved on screen, but that little moving dot thing in the center did get a bit repetitive.

So in summary, if it was a fraction longer this flash would have got a larger score from me, but you still did a fairly good job, so well done ;)/

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Lochie responds:

Everybody tells me that I should have done it longer.
Even I said it to myself, but I just didn't have the time to do it. :(

Silly dot, getting repetative like that.

Thanks for the review anyway.
:D

[Ichi Vs Byaku]

Wasn't this a little suprise!

You did a good job with this flash, so well done!

I thought the graphics were neat (although at times a bit dull), and music worked well with the whole flash.

If you were to make a similar flash to this in the future, I suggest adding more detail to the weapons, as they were a bit too bland.

Other than that, great job with your flash, and keep it up!

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Ogiyose responds:

yea i wanted to keep it simple

[In my mind]

Jolly good job ;D

All I can give this animation is praise...

First of all, I thought the menu was great. VERY cold and eerie, so well done with that.

The music was perfect for the genre, and you merged the music with the animation beautifully.

I thought the graphics were pretty good, and I loved the strong use of colour :).

So, in the end, well done, and I hope you carry on making more flashes like this ;).

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Lochie responds:

Thank you, the menu was originally supposed to be for a sniper game that I was thinking of making, but never decided to start, and it fitted well with this so yeah.

I am never really good with the colouring part, but thanks. :P

MORE FLASHES ARE TO COME. :D

[ifone]

Short, but sweet :)

You did an excellent job with this flash!

The flash was well drawn, and I thought the voice acting was spot on :D.

Carry on with the satire, sir!

NG Rating : 4/5

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RhysMus responds:

*blushing* awww thank you :D

[Newgrounds Intro Collab]

Just... fantastic!

This was an absolutely brilliant collab. Most of the pre-loaders were top notch in quality.

The menu was well laid out, and the design was great.
The music in the menu was also great.

One thing you could add to this flash is navigation buttons.

Apart from that, great job guys! and I'm just really annoyed at how horribly under-rated this flash is :(

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Insanimation responds:

Awesome, thanks!

[Ode to Elevator Music]

Hmm interesting

You don't see flashes like this everyday :).

Yes, it was short, but the message was lovely.

The music also worked quite well with the message (in my opinion), as the Elevator Music is a delightful piece of music.

I think you should definitely carry on making flashes like this, as it's refreshing compared to most things you see on this site :D.

~~Review Request Club~~

SprintT responds:

Thank you mate, and when inspiration hits I shall :)

[A new clock!]

Neat :D

I liked the idea very much, but the movie itself was quite short.

You also need to improve the graphics, for example add some shade.

The sound effects were fine, but at the end of the flash, it would be nice to add some background music, or a voice-over.

Finally, improve the replay menu, as it is a bit bland.

Anyhoo, good luck with all our future work, and I'm sure you could get some really good flashes on this site if you carry on with this :).

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sistem69 responds:

Thanks ill follow ur advices.