Mrputter's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Po's Kung Fu Maze BETA]

Needs a bit of improving.

It's not bad at all, it just needs a little bit more tweaking then it will be very good.
For example:

1) There was one small spelling mistake at the start (feell).
Okay this won't improve the game, but it's first impressions.

2) The music is great, and it works well with the game, but it does end suddenly.
I would do a continuous loop, rather than leaving a game with no music.

3) You may want to add some more music, and a mute button (which can be selected via the keyboard).

4) The instructions menu is quite dull. Brighten up the use of colours, and add some detail to the background, buttons, and text.

5) It can also be fairly hard to spot the maze lines at times.

6) Make 3 or so difficulty levels. The game now would probably be at hard level.

7) I would give the user 3-5 lives.

8) Finally add a game over screen.

Well that will be all, and good luck with all your future projects :).

WasabiNinja-XX responds:

thanks. im not remaking this thoh, just making something similar, better, but i will still take your advice. thanks for not blamming my sorry ass to the curb.

feell!!

[Highway Dodger]

This could be good.

To improve on what you have already, I would do the following.

1) Improve the sound quality of the car.

2) Add a couple more songs to the list and add a mute option as well.

3) At the moment, the graphics of the game are a bit dull.
All the enemy cars are identical in shape and colour.
Give the enemy cars some more colours (except for red of course), and perhaps even make a few different styles of car.

4) Change the distance from miles to metres.

5) The game is pretty hard. There should be maybe 3 or 4 difficulty levels to choose from (the game as it is now, would be at hard level).

6) Maybe add an arcade mode with 10 or so stages, where the user has to make it to a certain distance before the car crashes.

7) Give the user more lives (maybe 3). At the moment the game only lasts a few seconds.

8) Add a high-scores table.

9) Finally, add some music to the 'Game Over' section.

Well that is all from me. Good luck with everything, and if you take this all on board, I'm certain you'll create a very popular game :).

nerke responds:

thanks for the input i was already thinking of changing it from miles to metres, glad to see its not just me, and i will get right onto all of that thanks for the help.

[DOMINO-P]

Fantastic

The music, the graphics, and the presentation was excellent, and I hope this gets some sort of recognition.

Well Done.

[Doeo!]

Nice.

It was just an amazing game, I especially loved the concept the colours and graphics.

[Jugg]

Lots of nice games.

It may be a good idea for you to put a lot of these small games into one large collection.

Sort of like 'Grid16', and the player and record the total highscore from playing all the games.

Please reply :D.

[F-Bubble]

Neat little game

It is a nice simple game, but it needs a replay button, for when the game is over.

[The Impossible Quiz 2]

I admit...

..having played this on your site, it doesn't quite have the lasting appeal of the first quiz, but the game is still hugely entertaining.
It's great you managed to get it on here, but maybe you should tried to make another odd and original game, rather than this sequel.

P.S. Thanks for putting the fusestoppers in :).

Splapp-me-do responds:

Thanks! Yeah I think you're right about the lasting appeal. I tried my best though =p

People were pestering for a sequel, so I thought it'd be a shame not to make at least one. But after this, I doubt there'll be any more Impossible Quizzes.

[HotLap]

So what needs to be done.

Well the only sound effects are at the start, so maybe there should be some optional background music (3 choices, and a mute button).

Also, there should be more levels of difficulty...
For example, that could be the easy level, but the harder levels can have potholes, mud, zoom pads, awkward twists and turns and other obstacles.

You could also show the results for all the laps, and give the player the options of how many laps they want.

The car should also be customisable. They can maybe choose the car colour, the size of the car, and maybe they can alter the specifications of the car (e.g. power, steering etc.).

There can also be a countdown race, where the player has to do so many laps of the track in a certain amount of time. If they do, they proceed into the next round.

And there's 2-player, and comp races, but it would be best if you made a different game for that.

The graphics are nice and clean though.

Thanks for reading and good luck.

GyroSpazer responds:

Thnaks for all the ideas, i'll do my best to add as much as I can.

[Number Twist]

Way too simple.

This game's life span is far too short.

In my opinion, I think you should...

1. Add diffuculty levels from easy to very hard.

2. Make the users type in answers, or choose from options.

3. Use more than the additional sums.

4. Have different modes. E.g. Time trial, and arcade mode, which can have a time limit for each question.

5. Add a lively background music, and a sound for when the buttons are selected.

6. For the harder levels, use distraction methods to make it even harder.

And that's all I can think of about now. Good luck for all your future projects :).

[Platform Racing]

Impressive.

It's is a very interesting game, which has a fairly long life-span, but I think that if you really want to make a huge hit in newgrounds, maybe you should do something like champoinships. So the top two in a race go to the next round till eventually someone is a winner.

Hope you read this :).