Mrputter's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Scoot]

Great character styling.

Perhaps review how glasses look in side profile. I would imagine that you would see the corner of their eyes, and the glasses would be a little flatter in this view. The bridge over the nose wouldn't be visible either.

Maybe this guy is a good reference?
http://media.gettyimages.com/photos/young-man-wearing-sunglasses-side-view-closeup-picture-id200568699-001

OmegaKevin responds:

Thanks for this! Ive been having a hard time when it came to sunglasses like this. I dont really draw side views a lot. ;v;

[tarot 3: The empress]

Your style and technique is fabulous.

[Gon]

Great work man.

[Convenience Store]

Great work. Really beautiful

Starm0nk1e responds:

Thank you!

[NA NA NA NA NA]

This style is way up my street. Great work!

maxterdelta responds:

thank you, i just wished i was consistant with my style XD

[FLAN!!!]

Great work!

[Green Troublemakers]

Man, this is cool as hell

[Tiamat in Elegant Gothic Lolita Fashion]

This is very cool. Great work

KittyhawkMontrose responds:

Thank you so much!

[Genji Fan art vercion 1 Photoshop]

The drawing itself is great, but the texture you've used is too harsh. It makes it difficult to see your highlights and shading. I would consider reducing the texture's transparency or losing it altogether/

One other tip, perhaps look at using different lineweights to accentuate the character. Maybe the thickest lineweight for the left arm and hand, then a slightly less thick one for the outline of the character, and use the thinnest lineweight for the details (sword details, helmet details etc).

Nice work overall :)

DARKRIPS98 responds:

gracias por los consejos bro, lo re haré pero tomare en cuenta lo que me comentaste gg

[Goons]

Great style! I love the evening colours especially

Sharko responds:

Hey thanks! Really appreciate it.