Mrputter's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Fortnite Animated — Jablinski]

The animation is almost there. I think you could become an extremely talented artist if you work a bit more on your facial expressions and body gestures. They seem quite frozen at the moment, and you're losing out on some added comedy!

Just have fun experimenting for a bit and checking out some other animations. It's a lot of additional effort, but the viewers will know that and definitely appreciate it.

ZenithQuinn responds:

For sure! Hard these days with a full time job.This was something fun made in a weekend.

[Resident Onion]

Lol Jontron.

Not bad I guess, pretty standard for the stuff around the time, would have been cool if you continued with the animation, but eh :)

[|~Snow Snow For Lucy~|]

Brillitant

I thought that it was the most fantastic mini-movie.
I especially loved the story and the design of the characters.

Congratulations on this and I hope to see more of your work on Newgrounds soon :D

[Eat Big Fish Wrigleys]

Oh noes! Under-rated D:

I really enjoyed this flash!
The style of drawing was excellent, the voices were very good, and overall it was simply a well polished bit of work.
I think it may have been a bit of a mistake leaving the flash icon blank though, since a fair number of people seem to decide whether to watch something depending on the icon.

So in conclusion, great job, and I hope to see more flashes from you in the future :D

[An Ode to Iran]

Pretty good

Well, this isn't something you see everyday on Newgrounds :)

I thought it was executed well, I like the ending message, and the music was apposite to the flash, so very well done.

Best of luck with all future work as well!

[Strawberry's Gigantic Poo]

Oh my :D

It was brilliant, due to how hideously immature it was.
Why did SBC have to destroy the laptop though! I bet the book was awesome :D

Anyhoo, great job, and best of luck with all your future work!

[Jim and Pals Shorts: Ep 8]

Good job :)

I think you all did a good job with this flash :D.

The graphics were good, granted they weren't awe-inspiring, but it had a nice charm to it.

The audio quality was great, Jim's voice is a bit irritating in my opinion, but probably wouldn't of worked as well, if a less irritating voice was chosen ;).

In the end, it was a nice ad for flash player, and I did enjoy this flash, so Mazel-Tov!

From the ~~Review Request Club~~

Jimtopia responds:

Lol well Jim is just sort of an irritating character at times I suppose.

[Where ISN'T my mind?]

Soooo short :(

I admit, I like the song a lot, and I thought the cover is great, but I wish it was just 30seconds to a minute longer!

It was just about to get to the chorus, and it just stopped! which is such a shame :(.

The animation part was quite good, as I liked how the lyrics moved on screen, but that little moving dot thing in the center did get a bit repetitive.

So in summary, if it was a fraction longer this flash would have got a larger score from me, but you still did a fairly good job, so well done ;)/

From the ~~Review Request Club~~

Lochie responds:

Everybody tells me that I should have done it longer.
Even I said it to myself, but I just didn't have the time to do it. :(

Silly dot, getting repetative like that.

Thanks for the review anyway.
:D

[Moon Cat [Intro]]

Neat :D

This is a very sweet flash, which is nice as there aren't a lot of these on NG :).

The only problem with this flash was that the ending was a bit sudden and quite disappointing, it just ended.
I would have liked to seen a nice fading out scene, or something along those lines, as it would have given a considerably more dramatic ending

In the end, you still did well, so congrats ;).

From the ~~Review Request Club~~

RESPRiT responds:

It's an intro guys.
I mean, it's short, but you don't want it to be half the animation ya'know?

[Ichi Vs Byaku]

Wasn't this a little suprise!

You did a good job with this flash, so well done!

I thought the graphics were neat (although at times a bit dull), and music worked well with the whole flash.

If you were to make a similar flash to this in the future, I suggest adding more detail to the weapons, as they were a bit too bland.

Other than that, great job with your flash, and keep it up!

From the ~~Review Request Club~~

Ogiyose responds:

yea i wanted to keep it simple