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Mrputter

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A rather nice little piece :3

Firstly, I would like to say well done, as you didn't do a bad job here!

I can easily imagine this tune being played in the background of a lot of games and flashes.

A couple of things you may want to consider are...

1) Make the oboe a fraction louder.

2) Improve the ending. I was a bit disappointed by the ending, as there should of been some sort of grandeur to end, what was a good bit of music.

Anyhoo, well done with this bit of music, and I hope to hear mre of your work soon ;).

~~From the Review Request Club~~

Flash-MX responds:

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!
I most likely will update this piece as I completely agree with both your points,
Thanks again!
Peace

Needs some improving

I wouldn't call this piece of music, a bad job, but unfortunately it is by no means perfect.

I personally find this piece quite generic, which is probably this audio's main weakness.

It's also way too repetitive, next time, try to add a more erratic sound to the middle of the music.

Well, I hope I was of some help, and good luck with all your future work ;).

~~From the Review Request Club~~

jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review.

It was lovely ;3

Okay, I may not be a connoisseur of jazz, but I can honestly say, that this just had it :D.

I especially loved the intro, as it set the scene perfectly.

One tiny problem is that the middle of the song needs a little more 'punch'.

Well done though, and I hope you carry doing this :).

From the ~~Review Request Crew~~

Hacsev responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism!

I may not be a techno guru, but...

You did quite a good job here!

It's quite a unique tune, and it would definitely work well with many games.

The only slight problem was that it went a bit OTT in some places, but you still did a good job :).

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DjCompass responds:

Thanks. Glad you liked it :)
I Look forward to hearing more from you.

Pretty good work.

This song definitely has a lot of influences from Steve Vai, but I did find it a bit generic.

Try and make the sound a little bit more unique, and you'll do great :D.

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