Mrputter's Reviews

[Fortnite Animated — Jablinski]

The animation is almost there. I think you could become an extremely talented artist if you work a bit more on your facial expressions and body gestures. They seem quite frozen at the moment, and you're losing out on some added comedy!

Just have fun experimenting for a bit and checking out some other animations. It's a lot of additional effort, but the viewers will know that and definitely appreciate it.

ZenithQuinn responds:

For sure! Hard these days with a full time job.This was something fun made in a weekend.

[Resident Onion]

Lol Jontron.

Not bad I guess, pretty standard for the stuff around the time, would have been cool if you continued with the animation, but eh :)

[|~Snow Snow For Lucy~|]

Brillitant

I thought that it was the most fantastic mini-movie.
I especially loved the story and the design of the characters.

Congratulations on this and I hope to see more of your work on Newgrounds soon :D

[CopyCat]

Not an entirely new concept, but well thought-out levels and design.

Needs more levels and some sort of story progression.
Could benefit from mini-bosses and a boss at the end.

Figure out what kind of pacing you're going for with the levels.
Are they all slow and tactical levels, or will there be fast-paced levels.

Best of luck with future work!

[zOMGies]

A lot of fun

I'm normally not a massive fan of 'zombie shoot-em-ups', however I did spend a good amount of my time on this!

Of course the levels were repetitive, however the stats at the end of the level (% headshots for example) and wondering if you were going to get a new weapon or not made it a lot more fun to play, although when I earned the flamethrower, I seemed to spent most of the time in the levels holding the mouse button down and running about and succeeding, which eventually got pretty repetitive.

Overall though, great job and best of luck with any future Newgrounds submissions

Jimp responds:

Glad you liked it! Cheers for the review!

[Drop the Bomb (Medals)]

It is pretty good :D

I did find it very addictive, although I did appalling most of the time, since I haven't got a wide knowledge of American culture.

One small point - the Guns and Roses question was faulty. I selected the correct answer (K-Mart), and it told me I was wrong. So yeah :P

pacdude responds:

I'm getting that a lot. PM me with what it said the correct answer was and I'll try to fix it.

[Oboe.Classical.No.1]

A rather nice little piece :3

Firstly, I would like to say well done, as you didn't do a bad job here!

I can easily imagine this tune being played in the background of a lot of games and flashes.

A couple of things you may want to consider are...

1) Make the oboe a fraction louder.

2) Improve the ending. I was a bit disappointed by the ending, as there should of been some sort of grandeur to end, what was a good bit of music.

Anyhoo, well done with this bit of music, and I hope to hear mre of your work soon ;).

~~From the Review Request Club~~

Flash-MX responds:

Thanks for the feedback, much appreciated!
I most likely will update this piece as I completely agree with both your points,
Thanks again!
Peace

[Quick Shot]

Needs some improving

I wouldn't call this piece of music, a bad job, but unfortunately it is by no means perfect.

I personally find this piece quite generic, which is probably this audio's main weakness.

It's also way too repetitive, next time, try to add a more erratic sound to the middle of the music.

Well, I hope I was of some help, and good luck with all your future work ;).

~~From the Review Request Club~~

jxl180 responds:

Thank you for your review.

[Hacsev Jazz]

It was lovely ;3

Okay, I may not be a connoisseur of jazz, but I can honestly say, that this just had it :D.

I especially loved the intro, as it set the scene perfectly.

One tiny problem is that the middle of the song needs a little more 'punch'.

Well done though, and I hope you carry doing this :).

From the ~~Review Request Crew~~

Hacsev responds:

Thanks for the constructive criticism!

[Scoot]

Great character styling.

Perhaps review how glasses look in side profile. I would imagine that you would see the corner of their eyes, and the glasses would be a little flatter in this view. The bridge over the nose wouldn't be visible either.

Maybe this guy is a good reference?
http://media.gettyimages.com/photos/young-man-wearing-sunglasses-side-view-closeup-picture-id200568699-001

OmegaKevin responds:

Thanks for this! Ive been having a hard time when it came to sunglasses like this. I dont really draw side views a lot. ;v;

[tarot 3: The empress]

Your style and technique is fabulous.

[Gon]

Great work man.